If you just want everyone on your card to play nicely, that's one thing. If, however, you want truly polished and refined cards on which everyone plays together with perfect manners, then you have to pay really close attention to placement.
Consider the first card, which is, well, not perfect, but definitely not rude either.
BEFORE |
The three leaves (from Papertrey's Mighty Oak) are related to each other in a fan shape above the sentiment. BUT they are just a bit too far apart to be playing perfectly nicely and ever so slightly uneven in spacing, too.
Notice how close everything is in the sentiment (which is very well-behaved, by the way). To get along well with that sentiment, the leaves need to be closer together, too.
Closeness will make a nice, tight relationship and unify the design in harmony and goodness.
Compare the BEFORE card to my revised effort, which is much more unified. Notice how the curves of the leaves are a nice contrast to the lines and angles of the sentiment, but their more organized and unified layout feels so much more intentional than the first arrangement.
AFTER |
I'm all about easy.
But then, you already knew that, didn't you?
Supplies
stamps: Papertrey Might Oak (leaves), Mum's the Word (sentiment)
ink: Memento
paper: Papertrey white
accessories: gridded acrylic block
no wonder I'm a design mess; I like the first card better! go figure.
ReplyDeleteLOL, Joan! You're not a design mess. The first card is definitely not bad, but the second is more intentional and cleanER.
ReplyDeleteYou have a great eye Susan and I love how you show variations. The first one is a nice stamped card. The second one looks like it could be a printed Hallmark card. Both very nice.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful cards - Thank you for the examples to compare!
ReplyDeleteLove your tutorials, Susan. I always learn something, though sometimes it's something I already "knew", but had never really thought about!
ReplyDeleteIt's great to have the 'why' something 'feels' better to look at, Susan ... thank you! These are both such delightful cards ... now I understand why the second is even more so! Anita :)
ReplyDeleteI actually like the first card better too. To me, it looks like falling leaves... and the second card looks like a turkey butt! LOL :)
ReplyDeleteLOL! Turkey butt!!!
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